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Class 5

Pitching

& Storytelling

Space Business & Entrepreneurship

ASU SES 498/598

Fred von Graf, PMP

Tuesday, 1:30-2:45 PM

Transform your space venture into a compelling story

Today's Mission

What You'll Learn Today

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The Science of Storytelling

Why stories beat statistics

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Pitch Deck Mastery

What investors really want

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Delivery Excellence

Presence, pace, and power

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AI-Enhanced Pitching

Tools to perfect your pitch

Why Stories Matter

The Neuroscience of Persuasion

When we hear facts:

  • 2 brain areas activate (language processing)
  • 5% retention after 10 minutes

When we hear stories:

  • 7+ brain areas activate (full experience)
  • 65% retention after 10 minutes

Space Industry Challenge

  • • Complex technology
  • • Abstract benefits
  • • Long timelines
  • • High stakes

Solution: Make it human, make it real

The Hero's Journey for Startups

Your Pitch Narrative Arc

1

The World Today (Problem)

"Space debris threatens $500B in orbital assets..."

2

Call to Adventure (Opportunity)

"But what if we could clean it up profitably?"

3

The Journey (Solution)

"Our magnetic capture system..."

4

Transformation (Impact)

"Enabling sustainable space for generations"

5

The Guide (Team)

"Led by former NASA mission directors..."

The 10-Slide Pitch Deck

Sequoia's Framework Adapted for Space

1.

Title/Vision

Company, tagline, contact

2.

Problem

The pain you solve

3.

Solution

Your unique approach

4.

Market Opportunity

TAM, SAM, SOM

5.

Product/Technology

How it works

6.

Business Model

How you make money

7.

Competition

Your advantage

8.

Team

Why you'll win

9.

Financials/Traction

Progress to date

10.

Ask/Use of Funds

Funding and milestones

AI Pitch Enhancement

Prompts for Better Pitches

Hook Generator

Create 5 opening hooks for a pitch about [space venture].
Each should be <10 seconds and include:
- Surprising statistic
- Emotional connection
- Clear problem statement

Analogy Creator

Generate analogies to explain [complex space technology]
to non-technical investors. Use familiar concepts from
consumer tech, transportation, or telecommunications.

Story Builder

Transform these technical features [list] into customer
benefit stories. Format: "Imagine you're [customer]..."

The Problem Slide

Make Them Feel the Pain

Formula: Problem = Pain × Frequency × Number of People

❌ Weak:

"Satellites need better propulsion"

✅ Strong:

"Every year, 100+ satellites worth $5B become space junk because they can't maintain orbit. Operators lose $50M per dead satellite, and insurance premiums have tripled."

AI Prompt:

Quantify the problem of [issue] for [customer].
Include: financial impact, frequency, current solutions'
failures, and emotional cost to stakeholders.

The Solution Slide

Show, Don't Just Tell

Structure:

1.

Core Innovation (1 sentence)

2.

How It Works (visual/demo)

3.

Why Now (enabling factors)

4.

Proof Points (validation)

Visual Hierarchy:
  • • 70% visual (diagram/photo/demo)
  • • 30% text (headlines only)
Space Industry Tip:

Use animations to show orbital mechanics, deployment sequences, or data flow

The Traction Slide

Progress Over Perfection

Pre-Revenue Traction:

  • LOIs from customers
  • Government grants (SBIR, etc.)
  • Partnership agreements
  • Prototype milestones
  • Patent applications
  • Pilot programs

Presenting Metrics:

❌ Instead of:

"We have 3 customers"

"We raised $500K"

✅ Say:

"300% QoQ customer growth"

"Funded by NASA and Space Force"

Live Demo - Pitch Doctor

AI-Powered Pitch Improvement

Original Pitch:

"We make satellites last longer with our propulsion system."

Step 1: Problem Amplification (ChatGPT)

"Make this problem more urgent and quantifiable..."

Step 2: Solution Simplification (Claude)

"Explain this in terms a 12-year-old would understand..."

Step 3: Story Integration (Perplexity)

"Find a real example of satellite failure due to propulsion..."

Improved Pitch:

"When DirecTV's $250M satellite died from propulsion failure, 10M customers lost service. Our plug-and-play thruster would have saved it."

The 30-Second Elevator Pitch

Your Most Important Asset

The Formula:

1.
Hook (5 seconds)
2.
Problem (5 seconds)
3.
Solution (10 seconds)
4.
Credibility (5 seconds)
5.
Ask (5 seconds)

Example 1: Satellite Operations AI

"You know how SpaceX made launches 10x cheaper?" We're doing that for satellite operations. Our AI autopilot reduces operations cost by 90% while improving reliability. We've already signed NASA and two commercial operators. Looking for $5M Series A to scale."

Example 2: Space Debris Removal

"Every year, 100+ satellites become space junk threatening $500B in assets." Current removal solutions cost $50M per object—uneconomical. Our robotic tug uses ion propulsion to remove 10 objects per mission at $2M each. Our team built the ISS robotic arm and Mars rover systems. Seeking $10M to launch our first demonstration mission."

Your Turn: Pitch & Form Teams

30-Second Pitches & Team Formation

Activity Instructions

Step 1: Individual Pitches (20 minutes)
  • • Each student delivers their 30-second elevator pitch
  • • Use the formula: Hook → Problem → Solution → Credibility → Ask
  • • Stand and deliver with confidence
  • • Time limit strictly enforced
Step 2: Team Formation (10 minutes)
  • • Move to the person whose idea you want to work on
  • • Or stay put and recruit others to join your idea
  • • Form teams of 2-5 people
  • • If your idea isn't chosen, join another team
Step 3: Team Huddle (5 minutes)
  • • Quick introductions within your new team
  • • Discuss initial roles and strengths
  • • Exchange contact information
  • • Schedule first team meeting

Remember: Best Ideas Win!

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Be Passionate

Your enthusiasm is contagious

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Be Clear

Complexity kills interest

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Be Bold

Big problems need big solutions

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Be Open

Great teams make great companies

Handling Q&A

The Art of Investor Dialog

The STAR Method:

Situation: Context
Task: Challenge
Action: What you did/will do
Result: Outcome

Tough Questions Reframed:

Q: "How will you compete with Blue Origin?"

A: "We're not competing—we're enabling them. Our system makes their satellites 30% more profitable."

Q: "What if SpaceX adds this feature?"

A: "Great validation! We'd be an acquisition target."

Body Language & Delivery

Your Non-Verbal Pitch

Power Poses:

  • • Stand tall, shoulders back
  • • Open gestures (no crossed arms)
  • • Eye contact with entire room
  • • Movement with purpose

Voice Techniques:

  • • Vary pace (slow for emphasis)
  • • Pause after key points
  • • Project confidence (not arrogance)
  • • End statements down (not up?)

The 10-20-30 Rule:

  • • 10 slides
  • • 20 minutes max
  • • 30 point minimum font

Case Study - Relativity Space

From Idea to $1.3B Valuation

Their Story Arc:

Problem: "Rockets take 2 years to build with 100,000 parts"
Solution: "3D print entire rocket in 60 days with 1,000 parts"
Vision: "Build humanity's industrial base on Mars"

Pitch Evolution:

Seed: Focus on cost reduction
Series A: Focus on speed
Series B: Focus on flexibility
Series C: Focus on Mars

Key: Story evolved with proof points

Hands-On Exercise

Pitch Practice Session

Round 1: Problem Statement

(2 minutes)

  • • Partner presents problem
  • • Audience rates pain level (1-10)
  • • Iterate based on feedback

Round 2: Solution Demo

(3 minutes)

  • • Show how solution works
  • • Focus on "aha!" moment
  • • Get clarity score (1-10)

Round 3: Full Pitch

(5 minutes)

  • • Complete story arc
  • • Include all 10 slides
  • • Peer scoring on rubric

Practice makes perfect - each round builds confidence and clarity

Virtual Pitching

Mastering Remote Presentations

Technical Setup:

  • HD webcam at eye level
  • Ring light or window lighting
  • Clean, professional background
  • Backup internet connection

Engagement Tactics:

  • Look at camera (not screen)
  • Use names frequently
  • Interactive elements (polls)
  • Screen annotation tools
  • Shorter segments (5-7 min)
AI Background Prep:

Generate likely investor questions for [space venture]

based on recent funding trends in [sector].

Assignment

Pitch Deck Creation (Due Thursday)

Requirements:

1.

Create 10-slide pitch deck

2.

Record 5-minute pitch video

3.

Write 30-second elevator pitch

4.

Prepare Q&A document (10 questions)

5.

Design one "wow" visual/demo

Deliverables:
  • • PDF pitch deck
  • • Video file (MP4)
  • • Written elevator pitch
  • • Q&A prep document
Grading:
  • • Story clarity (30%)
  • • Visual design (20%)
  • • Delivery quality (25%)
  • • Problem/solution fit (25%)

Pitch Resources

Your Presentation Toolkit

Design Tools:

  • Canva (templates)
  • Pitch (collaborative)
  • Beautiful.ai (AI design)

Practice Platforms:

  • Pitcherific (timer/coaching)
  • Orai (AI speech coach)
  • BigSpeak (confidence training)

Inspiration:

  • YCombinator Demo Days (YouTube)
  • pitch-deck.com
  • AngelList pitch decks

The right tools amplify your message and save valuable time

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Thursday: Regulatory & Legal Considerations

You'll Learn:

  • Space law fundamentals
  • Licensing requirements
  • IP strategy
  • International compliance

Come Prepared:

  • Pitch deck complete
  • Questions about regulations
  • List of potential IP

Q&A

Questions?

Remember:

"People don't buy what you do, they buy why you do it"

- Simon Sinek

Pitch Tip:

Practice your pitch 50 times. By presentation day, it should feel like breathing.

Office Hours:

Tuesday/Thursday 3:00-4:00 PM

Contact:

Fred@W4M.ai

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Go inspire the world with your vision!